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Mediocre mysteries sugar-coated with soap opera theology.

An excellent book for a younger reader

Some Errors in Ned Christie Life Cloud Book

:|If you have read the other two books than you know exactly how this story is going to unfold. In all three books the women are beautiful, come from money, and are very sassy. The men are stubborn, rich, and powerful. The women come off as stupid in the romance department. Astra however is the worst-At twenty two she honestly thought that necking was making love. The story was one sided, we only know it from Astra's point of view. The reader only finds out what Sayre is thinking at the very end when he tells us. The book was okay, but like the other two, it could have been a lot better.


Interesting, but questionableWithin TRRoTW the mythological structure is centered upon a divinity called Wr-alda, the creator god, and Irtha, the earth goddess. Now, Wr-alda is depicted by OAM as a great serpent/dragon, whose form has seven heads and ten horns. Mr. Steele explains divers manners of mythological links to the draconic image, but fails to tell his readers the most obvious. *No where* does he mention that this description is straight out of the _New Testament_ "Revelations" regarding the antichrist. In all of the many *scholarly* works that I have read over the years, none but the christian "Revelations" describes such a being. Even Aleister Crowley's "beast", as seen in his Book of Thoth, is simply a usage of this image. Is this where OAM derives its impetus? If so, they aren't saying. I took the liberty of contacting them personally with regard to this question, but I received no answer.
Mind you, I have no problem with a group utilizing christian diabolical imagery or worshipping a "dark" divinity, but honesty is a must--especially when one is claiming to represent a *pre-christian* tradition in a supposed scholarly fashion. The "honesty" thing my simply be the result of an oversight on OAM/Steele's part, or it may be more...a hope that people might not notice the reference.
We have all encountered enough intellectual dishonesty and bad scholarship at the hands of the American publishing house, Llewellyn. The Brits are quick to make fun of this manner of Yankee "pagan" literary brain mush (as well they should), yet it is disappointing that Capal Bann has cranked out this minger.
"And I stood upon the sand of the sea, and saw a beast rise up out of the sea, having seven heads and ten horns, and upon his horns ten crowns, and upon his heads the name of blasphemy."
Revelation 13:1


A bit of a disappointment.

The Ship of Terror

BURY THE DEAD--APPRECIATE THE LIVINGWhy is Will the only one to hear the wailing of a ghost boy--buried alive in a forgotten tunnel of an abandoned mine a century ago? Who is likely to be blamed for a poltergeist's rampage? Neither kid appeals to the reader at first, as they outdo each in being sullen, selfish, uncommunicative, ungrateful, spiteful--deliberately perverse. The adults around them stuggle with anger and frustration. Can a boy from the London slums lay to rest the tormented spirit of another boy, whose mother seemed to desert him too? Family relationships are questioned. Readers must be flexible, as each chapter alternates between the cousins as narrators. A Chilling Tale for middle school kids.


Thomas JEfferson and the AMerican Ideal

Fair book
"Tracks of Deceit" is the first mystery story in a series about the 19th century American detective Katy Steele. After her father is murdered, Katy's determination to find her father's killer brings her to the construction site of the transcontinental railroad. With her partner Sam Bronte, Katy uncovers a ruthless plot to sabotage the railroad project, and finds herself faced with murderous and money hungry villains who will stop at nothing to achieve their aims, even if it means Katy and her companions need to be "eliminated."
"Imperial Intrigue" is the second volume in the series, and describes Katy and Sam's new assignment in protecting an Austrian prince and princess who are settling down on a ranch in the American West. Katy soon shares in the struggles faced by the foreign royal party: adjusting to ranch life, befriending the ranch family, facing the murderous attempts of a greedy neighbouring rancher to take over the property, and avoiding death at the hands of a skilled assassin.
What NOT to expect:
1. Solid theology and a thought provoking message..... Typical of much evangelical thinking, this book offers only shallow theology. Typical are the ideas that heaven will be "enriched" by a wonderful Christian ("Tracks of Deceit" p.45), a false contrast between an Old Testament God of justice and the New Testament God of love (p.129), the idea that it is entirely wrong to judge someone even from their lifestyle (p.195), the pop-psychology assessment that an evil self-centred life is not really sin but rather indicative of being "seriously sick...insane." (p.216), the secular notion that Christians must learn to love themselves more ("Imperial Intrigue" p.178), and that it is possible for an unbeliever to be "basically a good person." Despite the fall into sin, the authors have rather too much faith in human nature, which is probably not surprising considering their Arminian theology (p.50,142). Such shallow thinking was evident throughout, and results in a grinding down of the gospel of Christ into a super-sweet sugar coating and sprinkling it over the story-line. Also of concern is the Biblical thinking that is missing from these books. Instead of focussing on the "unseen" heavenly promises, the authors focus with nauseating regularity on the "seen" qualities of physical beauty and physical attraction ("Tracks of Deceit" p.76,164, "Imperial Intrigue" p.32,47). When this secular focus was combined with a liberal dose of sappy romance ("Tracks of Deceit" p.125, "Imperial Intrigue" p.81) where characters habitually wind up kissing at their first meeting or soon afterwards, at times I could hardly believe I was reading a Christian book.
2. Strong characterization..... Katy herself is rather one-dimensional. While barely shedding a tear over her father's death, she immediately goes off to play detective and find his murderer. Although the characterization does improve in "Imperial Intrigue" (especially the attention devoted to the internal relationships of the ranch family), on the whole the characterization leaves much to be desired. Even the unbelieving "good guys" are surprisingly unselfish or else become Christian at the tip of a hat, whereas the "bad guys" have no redeeming qualities whatsoever, and are nearly always presented as "human monsters" that are always evil all the time.
3. A surprising and unpredictable plot..... The authors left so many clues that one of the surprising plot twists at the end of "Tracks of Deceit" came as no surprise whatsoever, but was instead entirely expected. When there are surprises, in both books they are frequently the result of most remarkable coincidences that are hardly credible, and thus hardly satisfying. Although "Imperial Intrigue" was certainly more credible and convincing than "Tracks of Deceit", weaknesses are still evident - among them an incident where the authors resort to having one of the characters have an unexplained urge to visit a grave in the middle of the night (p.195) in order to get three of the characters out of the house. Oh please!
What to expect:
1. Lots of action, intrigue and murder..... There is constant riveting action and intrigue, as Katy tumbles from one hair-raising situation to another. There is action aplenty, and by the end of the "Tracks of Deceit" there are several corpses, gun battles, kidnappings and sabotage. "Imperial Intrigue" also features constant action and intrigue, and probably even surpasses the effort of the first book. Despite the lack of realism at times, it is really the story-line that gives these books any measure of success.
2. An informative historical picture..... Despite the presence of a few questionable anachronisms (such as Katy's strong anti-discrimination and pro-feminist sentiments, as well as the frequent portrayal of minority groups as Christian), both books give interesting historical information without being tedious. "Tracks of Deceit" passes on many interesting and accurate historical details about the construction of the transcontinental railroad project - without allowing the novel to degenerate into a history lecture. Especially the conflict between two rival railway construction companies and the conflict between the Irish and the Chinese laborers is finely portrayed. Similarly, "Imperial Intrigue" gives a fascinating portrait of the prairie setting, and the trials and triumphs of ranch life.
In short, if you are willing to overlook the over-sweetened sugar-coating of shallow soap opera theology, you can enjoy these books as mediocre mysteries. But at best, these books offer little more than a so-so story-line, shoddily dressed in a rather poor-quality garment of thin Christian content.